About the following essay:
The biology citation is not included. (Always include works cited in your essays).
The diction in your essay would be more formal, and you would use at least two texts. However, this should still help you to see how sythesis occurs. The two topics include:
(1) Sexual Communication
(2) Biology
My girlfriend and I have always tried to find ways to improve our relationship. In the communication, support, and yes. in the sexual part of our relationship.
In the past we’ve tried to be very open about what we like and dislike, both partners agreeing to be honest while not being offended about what the other one had to say.
Not long ago we had one of our talks where we discussed such matters. She reluctantly informed me that she would like more stimulation in our foreplay resulting her breasts. I didn't get angry at all, but I wondered how much was it going to take.
I put these questions into words and she revealed to me it wasn't so much the amount of time, but the area I was stimulating was not as productive as some other areas might be. I became impatient. "Where?," I said. She quietly came back, "The nipple."
I started to laugh out loud when I remembered the lecture in class. I told her that makes sense, because sexual stimulation is what women complain about during breast feeding. I told her that pressure is the stimulus for the tactile sense and that when something touches her nipple an action potential is started, then Oxytocin is released by the hypothalamus to her uterus and small muscles in her breast.
I told her that if she were pregnant (God forbid), that these muscles would shoot the milk out for her baby to feed on. Her uterus contracting is what makes her stimulated sexually. She rolled over away from me and said, "If you don’t want to do it, just say so!"
This example is taken from:http://users.adelphia.net/~sachssci2/synsampl.htm
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